Thursday, January 31, 2008

Know me..

Xeon knows me no more

It says I don’t care for it


Hopes have given up on me

They say I don’t love them anymore


Thoughts leave me in disbelief

They unleash themselves in uncharted horizon


I am only trailing a quiet place

Though tranquility is not the game


Dreams don’t give their names, no more

Ambiguous mind is at the shore


Prelude to know me is the theme of this rendition

But the idea to live, seems to be lost in the translation


- C



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2 comments:

Unknown said...

No one comprehends your hush, which may be on other side too…Deep thoughts might not give you the answer … broaden your perspective u might find what you are looking for…. Uncharted…. Trailing…Tranquility…. Ambiguous are superficial words ….keep life as simple as possible coz its too short to live upto ur expectation….

Chintan Shukla said...

When noone comprehends my thoughts and i dont comprehend other's thoughts, then there is no connection happening :)
Deep thoughts gives me a chance to connect to myslf, and i guess everyone gets lucky when they start doing that!!
On a lighter note, uncharted, trailing, tranquility and ambiguous are high-frequency words (not superficial) and I love using such words in my rendition, more often than not, coz they end up doing poetic justice to my creation :)